So now he has three hands?
Waxing poetic.
And again.
No, seriously. Stop sucking. Now!
Makes him sound like a power tool.
What season is this again? Fix description.
In 1751? I don't think so.
What? Losing your reader here. Losing the writer, too.
Is this her pussy or a cat after a bath?
Impossible since he is still wearing pants. Are these some kind of novelty pants? X [marks the spots in need of fixing]
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